Sunday, October 23, 2011
INTRODUCTION
Imagine if were a really poor person who lives in a slum. A slum is a densely populated urban area inhabited by very poor people. They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water to drink, and do not recive medical care as they should. All people who live in slums live in really bad conditions.
Monday, October 17, 2011
Outline
I. Introduction
a. Imagine if you were a really poor person who lived in a slum.
b.Slum is a densely populated urban area inhabited by very poor people.
c.They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water drinking, and do not recieve medical care as they should.
d. All of the people who live in all of them live in bad conditions.
II. Defendable point # 1
a. All of the people who live in slums all of the people live in bad conditions
b. "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum are very dirty"
c. This quote shows how people in slums live in bad canditions.
d. All of the people in slums have no good drinking water.
III. Defendable point # 2
a. All people in slums have no safe drinking water
b. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, espeacially to young children."
c. This quote shows how not only water, but also food are contaminated and it is not safe.
d. People who live in slums do not receive medical care as they should.
IV. Defendable point # 3
a. People in slums do not receive medical care as they should
b. "The indivisual who tips the scales might be a baby born to a city dweller or an adult migrating from the countryside, but in either case, it's likely that his or her new surrondings will include flimsy walls, disease and an enveloping stench of sewage and trash."
c. This quote shows how babyborn babys will grow up especially with diseases wich they dont recieve good medical care.
d. So this proves how slums have effects on human populations
V. Conclusion
a. So once again imagine if you were a poor person living in a slum
b. They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good drinking water, and do not receive good medical care
c. So this prove how bad conditions in slums, no good drinking water, and no good medical care people there live in.
d. Think about the people who live in slums and step into their shoes.
a. Imagine if you were a really poor person who lived in a slum.
b.Slum is a densely populated urban area inhabited by very poor people.
c.They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water drinking, and do not recieve medical care as they should.
d. All of the people who live in all of them live in bad conditions.
II. Defendable point # 1
a. All of the people who live in slums all of the people live in bad conditions
b. "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum are very dirty"
c. This quote shows how people in slums live in bad canditions.
d. All of the people in slums have no good drinking water.
III. Defendable point # 2
a. All people in slums have no safe drinking water
b. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, espeacially to young children."
c. This quote shows how not only water, but also food are contaminated and it is not safe.
d. People who live in slums do not receive medical care as they should.
IV. Defendable point # 3
a. People in slums do not receive medical care as they should
b. "The indivisual who tips the scales might be a baby born to a city dweller or an adult migrating from the countryside, but in either case, it's likely that his or her new surrondings will include flimsy walls, disease and an enveloping stench of sewage and trash."
c. This quote shows how babyborn babys will grow up especially with diseases wich they dont recieve good medical care.
d. So this proves how slums have effects on human populations
V. Conclusion
a. So once again imagine if you were a poor person living in a slum
b. They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good drinking water, and do not receive good medical care
c. So this prove how bad conditions in slums, no good drinking water, and no good medical care people there live in.
d. Think about the people who live in slums and step into their shoes.
Thesis Statement
They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water to drink, and do not received medical care as they should.
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