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FINAL DRAFT

Alex Flores

Ms. Jaeger

World Geo

Final Draft

Slums Affecting Human Population

Imagine if you were really poor person who lives in a slum. A slum is a densely populated

urban area inhabited by very poor people. They are many effects that slums have in

human population; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water to drink,

and do not receive medical care as they should. All people in slums live in bad

conditions.



All of the people who live in slums live in bad conditions. “The houses are made of mud

and they’re very crowded. And the slum are very dirty.” This quote shows how people in

slums live in bad conditions because it describes how slums are very dirty. All people in

slums have no good water to drink.



All people in slums have no safe drinking water. “Human waste leaches into the water

people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that

can be deadly, specially to young children.” This quote shows how not only water, but

also food are contaminated because it describes how it isn’t safe. People who live in

slums do not receive medical care as they should.



People in slums do not receive medical care as they should. “ The individual who tips the

scales might be a baby born to a city dweller or an adult migrating from the countryside,

but in either case, it’s likely that his or her new surroundings will include flimsy walls,

disease and enveloping stench of sewage and trash.”

This quote shows how baby born baby’s will grow up in an environment of diseases

because shows how poor they are can afford for medicine. So this proves how slums have

on human population.

So once again imagine if you were a really poor person living in a slum. They are many

effects that slums have on human population; people in slums live in bad conditions,

have no good safe drinking water, and do not receive medical care as they should. So

think about those people who live in slums all over the world and step into their shoes.

ROUGH DRAFT

Alex Flores

Ms. Jaeger

World Geo

Rough Draft

Slums Affecting Human Population

Imagine if you were really poor person who lives in a slum. A slum is a densely populated

urban area inhabited by very poor people. They are many effects that slums have in

human population; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water to drink,

and do not receive medical care as they should. All people in slums live in bad

conditions.



All of the people who live in slums live in bad conditions. “The houses are made of mud

and they’re very crowded. And the slum are very dirty.” This quote shows how people in

slums live in bad conditions because it describes how slums are very dirty. All people in

slums have no good water to drink.



All people in slums have no safe drinking water. “Human waste leaches into the water

people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that

can be deadly, specially to young children.” This quote shows how not only water, but

also food are contaminated because it describes how it isn’t safe. People who live in

slums do not receive medical care as they should.



People in slums do not receive medical care as they should. “ The individual who tips the

scales might be a baby born to a city dweller or an adult migrating from the countryside,

but in either case, it’s likely that his or her new surrondings will include flimsy walls,

disease and enveloping stench of sewage and trash.”

This quote shows how baby born baby’s will grow up in an enviroment of diseases

because shows how poor they are can affort for medicine. So this proves how slums have

on human population.

So once again imagine if you were a really poor person living in a slum. They are many

effects that slums have on human population; people in slums live in bad conditions,

have no good safe drinking water, and do not receive medical care as they should. So

think about those people who live in slums all over the world and step into their shoes.

INTRODUCTION

Imagine if were a really poor person who lives in a slum. A slum is a densely populated urban area inhabited by very poor people. They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water to drink, and do not recive medical care as they should. All people who live in slums live in really bad conditions.  

Outline

I. Introduction
a. Imagine if you were a really poor person who lived in a slum.
b.Slum is a densely populated urban area inhabited by very poor people.
c.They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water drinking, and do not recieve medical care as they should.
d. All of the people who live in  all of them live in bad conditions.

II. Defendable point # 1
a. All of the people who live in slums all of the people live in bad conditions
b. "The houses are made of mud and they're very crowded. And the slum are very dirty"
c. This quote shows how people in slums live in bad canditions.
d. All of the people in slums have no good drinking water.

III. Defendable point # 2
a. All people in slums have no safe drinking water
b. "Human  waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly, espeacially to young children."
c. This quote shows how not only water, but also food are contaminated and it is not safe.
d. People who live in slums do not receive medical care as they should.

IV. Defendable point # 3
a. People in slums do not receive medical care as they should
b. "The indivisual who tips the scales might be a baby born to a city dweller or an adult migrating from the countryside, but in either case, it's likely that his or her new surrondings will include flimsy walls, disease and an enveloping stench of sewage and trash."
c. This quote shows how babyborn babys will grow up especially with diseases wich they dont recieve good medical care.
d. So this proves how slums have effects on human populations

V. Conclusion
a. So once again imagine if you were a poor person living in a slum
b. They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good drinking water, and do not receive good medical care
c. So this prove how bad conditions in slums, no good drinking water, and no good medical care people there live in.
d. Think about the people who live in slums and step into their shoes.

Thesis Statement

They are many effects that slums have on human populations; people in slums live in bad conditions, have no good water to drink, and do not received medical care as they should.